WRT333
Latinizations, redundancy, noun clusters, negatives
Week 4
Revise the following to eliminate difficult words, noun clusters, latinisms, and redundancies. Even-number sentences include a hint, taken from the notes on latinizations, etc.
1—The documentation precision of the combined atmospheric science and environmental protection agencies final report was obviated when the technical findings were reduced into a singular summary document by the actions of the intergovernmental panel. (latinizations, noun clusters, difficult phrases)
2—The particulate concentration estimators of the carbon dioxide atmospheric measurements was accurate to at least a level of 98 percent.
3—Evaluation of ecosystem structural integrity was terminated shortly after the agencies findings began to be found to contradict policy decisions of the administrative control group. (latinization)
4—Assessment of ice depth measurements from drilled core samples was characterized to be irrelevant as an indicator of global temperature increase by the climate skeptic.
5—Presence of chloride salts in the array of samples at sufficiently high levels can negatively alter the efficacy of the chromatographic testing procedures. (negative)
6—Formation of an undergraduate academic social unit for action on excess institutional internal documentation requirements stimulated responses by the head College academic administrator to accelerate unit-wide adoptation of a process of reutilization of said materials.
7—The master plan for the North Campus featured a centralized all-weather high-volume, dedicated surface provision for efficient flow of pedestrian traffic. (redundancy, overblown phraseology)
8—She initiated her customary diurnal nutritional cycle with a repast of decimated chicken embryos with pan-braised pork belly slices.
9—The chief executive officer of the higher education institution promulgated a policy for termination of access to the grounds during periods of exceptionally above average frozen precipitation. (latinization, overblown phraseology)
10—The increase in revenue at the multipurpose physical education center is indicative of the positive win:loss benefit ratio of the new basketball trainer-in-chief.